Never Leave Me Alone
Posted: Thursday, September 02, 2010
By Chiradeep
Wonderful piece.Thank you for the invite, but your work is heart-felt and complete. Deeply meaningful work.
It's writing like this that makes me want a higher rating to give it. "5" equals 100%, but this piece goes far beyond that.
Thank you for sharing, Brother Chiradeep.Thanks Doc, for that sweet comment. You're a great blessing and encouragement.Thanks again...
Hi Chiradeep,I am so honored you considered me to be apart of such a sincere, loving petition. King David couldn't have wrote it any more sincere. I agree with Ken, "it is finish."Thanks Sis!That's so sweet of you. Can't even think of David, 'a man after God's own heart'Hugs...CP
In agreement, it is finished. It's beautiful, lovely and touches to the core of the heart. Thank you for thinking of me. Always the best and blessings.Hey my dear sister in Christ, thanks for that sweet comment. God bless you too.
Great article Chiradeep and thank's for the invite, Very meaningful and heart-felt, Welldone.Best wishesEmmaThanks a lot.
Great article Chiradeep and thank's for the invite, Very meaningful and heart-felt, Welldone.Best wishesEmmaThanks for a repeat comment...
He is SO incredible - thank you for sharing your heart and your Savior!! this piece could be a worship chorus - i will sing it to Him too!Thanks a lot sister.I have already decided that I will compose it.
Beautiful poem, full of humbleness and submission for God and you are certain of His Grace.I am honored. So sweet of you. Thanks a lot. God is so awesome that I am nothing before Him.
Hi Chiradeep.Your faith and devotion are very clear. The depth of your feelings are as well. You asked me for a little help in writing this. I won't mess with it as it is an expression of your inner feelings and came from you as it is for a reason. But I will offer this: It is very difficult to express serious and deep feelings in rhyme. The need to stick to a pattern of sounds and timing can be very limiting. This poem might have worked better for you, if you had dumped the rhyme. But, still, it is wonderful as it is.Hugs,Dianne
Good poem Chiradeep, thanks for sharing
Chiradeep Patra, is an Accountant in a Non-Govt Organization in India. He is married and blessed with a beautiful wife by his side.
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He is an author and have written many articles for webzines and magazines.
He is a Psychological Counselor who deals with the following matters: Stress Management, Teenage & Adolescent Problems, Love, Crush & Relationship Problems, Depression & Anxiety Problem (not clinical), Personality Building & Development, Healthy Mental Living Matters, Spiritual & Biblical Matters etc.
He owns a website: www.asmideep.webs.com
Contacting e-Mail: chiradeepp@gmail.com
(To know more about him click: www.facebook.com/chiradeepp )
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